안녕하세요 첨삭 부탁드립니다.

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- 질문하는 선생님 : 세이임 선생님

- 질문하는 강의/교재명 : 한번에 합격하는 영어면접 매직템플릿

- 질문하는 문제의 위치 : 1강 파트

- 질문 내용 : 첨삭 문의드립니다. 내년 대학원을 졸업을 앞두고 있어서, 회사 지원시에 신입 혹은 경력으로 되는 경우가 있어 템플릿을 기반으로 작성해보았는 데, 피드백해주신다면, 열심히 한번 수정해보겠습니다. 선생님 덕분에 LV6도 만들었고, 회사 취업에 있어 한번 더 매직의힘을 빌려 꼭 좋은 결과 얻도록하겠습니다. 감사합니다.  

1] Hello, my name is hyeonseok jwa, and I would like to introduce myself.

After graduating from gachon university, I studied chronic pain and itch for 3 years in sensory physiology & cognition laboratory. I am currently preparing for my master’s degree in February 2020. At the time, my duty was studying nonclinical study as well as documenting big projects based on R&D. So, I was able to learn how to deal with documenting data and analysis and planning non-clinical study. As a person who works in R&D field, I already knew that your company is a top tier and I am particularly interested in Regulatory affairs. It’s connected to work that I did before. Not only do I have a great passion to work, But I love this Drug development field. So, I hope to get a chance to join your wonderful team.

2] Hello, my name is hyeonseok jwa, and I would like to introduce myself.

Now, I am preparing for graduating from Gachon grauate school in Master’s degree Next year

During my master’s degree, I have been longing work in nonclinical study of pain and itch, and I thought it would be really fascinating to join the big projects that are involved in improving people’s life. I found the high reputation of your firm in the CRO field of Regulatory affairs. To talk about my self little more, I would like to describe myself as a Bright and positive person. I always have the power to look at everything positively and to overcome it. It is an honor to be interviewed by your company today, and I wish that I can become a great asset as a hardworking employee.

자기소개 간결

Hello, my name is hyeonseok jwa, and I would like to introduce myself.

Now, I am preparing for graduating from Gachon grauate school in Master’s degree Next year. During my master’s degree, I have been longing work in nonclinical study of pain and itch, and I thought it would be really fascinating to join the big projects that are involved in improving people’s life.

입사지원 동기

After entering Graduate school, I thought about my goals for the future. I had planned which field and which company I wanted to work for. I already knew that your company is a top tier in CRO field, and I have been long in to join your firm, and start my career. It became a strong motivation for me. I am good at how to deal with documenting data and analysis and planning non-clinical study. So, if you give me an opportunity, I will try to be the best worker in RA field.

어떤 준비

To join your company, I studied my major very hard. And I tried to participate in various drug research project and searching on reference based on natural drug and bio-vector and documenting data and analysis.

Recently, I studied Introductory course in Drug development to obtain knowledge of RA field.

These days, I’ve been reading articles related to your firm.

감사합니다. 

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